[ Which is to say it's fine, but not wording it like that. The small boy's tail curls a little at his side, and he reaches his somewhat chilly hands to stroke at the newly exposed skin, brushing over her shoulders and collar bone, and pressing a kiss to the former. They should eat more. He was hungry, she was always hungry...
But at the same time, he was so fascinated by her and her body, now that he finally had admitted to his desire for it. The young man's mouth opens wide and he bites her on the shoulder.
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[ Which is to say it's fine, but not wording it like that. The small boy's tail curls a little at his side, and he reaches his somewhat chilly hands to stroke at the newly exposed skin, brushing over her shoulders and collar bone, and pressing a kiss to the former. They should eat more. He was hungry, she was always hungry...
But at the same time, he was so fascinated by her and her body, now that he finally had admitted to his desire for it. The young man's mouth opens wide and he bites her on the shoulder.
... Biting feels different now too ]